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"Your essay is neatly formatted and easy to read. You have selected quality evidence to support your exploration of the motif. The essay is lacking both an introduction and conclusion. Your introduction should include more of an explanation of what a motif is, and specifically what this one represents. You could also include examples of other works that have this motif. The conclusion should summarize all the main points you made in the essay and reiterate the goal of your paper. In general, you should not introduce quotes by stating what page they are on. Consider creating a different sort of transition. Also, any quote that is longer than four lines should be a block quote. On that note, both quotes you use are rather long. Consider only using a part of each quote and further elaborating on the concept in your own words. There are some places in the essay where the writing feels more conversational than scholarly. This can be resolved by removing unnecessary words such as "little" and "just.""
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