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Expressions of Love in Love Medicine by Louise Erdrich

This paper explores the different expressions of love in the context of some Native American cultures in Love Medicine by Louise Erdrich. The author focuses on the love triangle in the story and how the characters are motivated by love.
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Bob's feedback:

"You provide some very good details about the different expressions of love throughout this story, and your different themes and subjects are divided well into separate paragraphs, with some good transitions. It would be a good idea to rethink the intro paragraph, however, since the body and conclusion of the paper don't support the idea that the author is offering a perspective on Native American culture. The focus here is on love and how it is expressed, and while that all takes place in the context of Native American culture and traditions, that culture is not the focus of the analysis. Also, for clarity, consider opening each body paragraph with a sentence that states what is being said about love, or how love is being portrayed, in the following sentences. Topic sentences with specific focus help guide your reader through your ideas. Finally, consider having the paper proofread or peer-reviewed as grammar and syntax errors can make the ideas difficult to follow."

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