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Failure Can Eventually Lead to Success

In this argumentative essay, a student explains why failure is not always a bad thing and can eventually lead to success. The student discusses how failure teaches people valuable lessons, keeps people humble, and makes people wise.
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Angela's feedback:

"You structured your essay well, so it’s easy to follow your supporting points and understand how they contribute to your main argument. Your essay would look neater, though, if you did a check to ensure that the first line of each paragraph is indented by exactly half an inch. You also want to make sure that your title is perfectly centered and does not feature a half-inch indent. In terms of writing convention errors, there are issues with parallel structure in some sentences with lists, and run-on sentences such as the one that begins “Just know that” should be recast to improve the flow of your writing. A final review is recommended to fix simple errors such as the use of “its” instead of “it’s.”"

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