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"You structured your essay well, so it’s easy to follow your supporting points and understand how they contribute to your main argument. Your essay would look neater, though, if you did a check to ensure that the first line of each paragraph is indented by exactly half an inch. You also want to make sure that your title is perfectly centered and does not feature a half-inch indent. In terms of writing convention errors, there are issues with parallel structure in some sentences with lists, and run-on sentences such as the one that begins “Just know that” should be recast to improve the flow of your writing. A final review is recommended to fix simple errors such as the use of “its” instead of “it’s.”"
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Kibin. (2023). Failure can eventually lead to success. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/failure-can-eventually-lead-to-success-fCPJ9yIb
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