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People often have a loving attitude towards their families although members of your family may annoy you more times than not Since I became a teenager I never had a good relationship with my family because I always thought the way they acted towards me was just to irritate meMy family consists of my mom dad my twin sisters who are 3 years younger than me and my two dogs My dad and I got along the best this was because we never fought since he was at work a lot and he would often take me golfing which is my favorite activity Although I understood my sisters more than my parents we would still have many disagreements quite often They were usually about something petty such as I wore a shirt of theirs and they didnt give me permission The relationship I had with my mother contained the greatest amount of strain She is a stay at home mom and therefore was the person telling me what I could not do Therefore I blamed everything bad that happened to me on her since she was the one controlling my life after all I thought of my family in an extremely different way than most I felt as if they were only doing things to make my life more miserable and would go out of their way to annoy me For example my parents would take away my phone at night for no apparent reasons basically just because they could This may seem like a simple act but to me it was more than that I thought they were trying to prove that they had more power than I did and although I was 18 I still had nearly no control over my life I wanted nothing to do with my family and when we were together I wanted to be somewhere else Every time we would be out in a public place together
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