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Famous Historical Figures I Would Invite to Dinner

In this reflective essay, a student considers which famous historical figures he would invite to sit at a table with him for stimulating discussion. The student shares his reasoning behind his choices and the seating chart.
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Angela's feedback:

"It's interesting that you not only decided on which famous historical figures you'd like to have a discussion with but the order they'd be sitting in as well. Moreover, you provided some good reasons for your seating chart. Remember though that the first time you mention a historical figure, you should use the person's full name. After that, it is appropriate to refer to the individual by last name only. Regarding your choices, it would be a good idea to get more specific with your reference to Queen Isabella of Spain since there's been an Isabella I and an Isabella II. Also, although there aren't many issues with writing conventions, in your first sentence, you should specify what you'd be inviting these historical figures to. Finally, your paragraphs should be indented, and your work would be stronger if you provided more detailed topic sentences for your body paragraphs to help the reader understand why you've chosen to start a new paragraph."

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