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"You have a lot of great insights into the play, and you identify some key scenes that are really striking and drive home the feminist overtones of the play. However, your essay suffers from a lack of organization and clarity of purpose. The paper should be broken up into paragraphs, and each paragraph should have its own topic. This will help you organize your arguments rather than jumping between subjects. Make sure your intro tells the reader, in broad terms, what you will be discussing. Your main idea seems to be that this play should be seen as a feminist work, so make sure to mention that in your thesis statement and support that idea in each subsequent paragraph. Be sure to introduce ideas before discussing them -- for instance, your readers aren't told about the existence of a canary before its significance is brought up abruptly. Finally, make sure to have a peer or editor proofread your essay to address awkward/incorrect word choices and confusing sentences."
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