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I had not seen my friend Jennifer in so long We had been great friends in high school but after graduation we went our seperate ways as most did One day I decided to go to the mall during my lunch break to squeeze in some much needed shoe shopping As I was browsing through the Nine West pumps I spotted Jennifer who was holding hands with a gorgeous guy just a few feet away I decided to go up and say hello We talked for a few minutes and agreed to meet for lunch the next day to do some catching up The next day we met at OCharleys around noon I could hardly wait for her to tell me all about that dashing man she was with at the mall We chatted a while and finally she told me she had met her new boyfriend through an internet dating service to my surprise She told me to give it a try as I was very hesitant Before we went our separate ways she jotted down the website on a napkin That night as I loafed around the house bored out of my mind thinking how wonderful it would be to meet a nice guy I decided to give the internet dating thing a go On the site it had a section in which I was to describe my ideal man Im a very picky girl when it comes to men so it took me a while to get my description down to the one hundred word limit but I finally did It read as follows I like a tall guy preferably at least six feet with long dark shaggy but clean hair Personality-wise I would like someone with a great sense of humor who is sensitive respectful honest creative and thoughtful I really like rock and roll so that is a must A nice luxurious car is also a
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