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I went on a trip to Las Vegas last summer it was there that I had one of the most bitter-sweet epiphanies of my life It was scorching hot but the Las Vegas heat didnt burn me nearly as badly as the fire burning in my heart His name was Justin He had me hook line and sinker from the second his eyes met mine At that exact moment the phrase my heart skipped a beat had never seemed so clear He stopped me dead in the casino as I was walking just to compliment me on my dress He rambled on about how beautiful I was and how many women he has seen that couldnt compare He told me my accent was cute I replied to all his compliments with gratitude in my thickest southern belle accent of course We sat there and talked at a black jack table for just a few minutes It seemed much longer though because time literally stood still Nothing else mattered to us at that moment He took my number and asked me on a date for the following night I eagerly exchanged numbers with him and then went back to meet with my friends They said I seemed like I had been drinking I joked and told them that I was just drunk on love That whole night I was on cloud 9 I didnt know if he would call or if everything he told me was just part of some wicked plan to deceive me I didnt care All I knew was I met an amazing guy and we had a connection When my phone rang the next night I nearly broke three bones trying to lunge across the room to get to it His voice on the other end was just as sweet as it had been the night before He told me to meet him down stairs in the hotel lobby at 8
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