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"You did a good job of defining your purpose for writing, which is to examine gender bias in India's laws concerning rape. However, your paper would be more effective with a stronger, clearer introduction; the paragraph following your conclusion is unnecessary and may serve you better toward the beginning of your essay, for instance. When formatting your paper, be sure that all of the font is the same size and all the lines are spaced out in a uniform manner. There are some missteps with your in-text citations, as you generally do not need to include both in-text citations and footnotes; please see your style guide for additional guidance on formatting those. As there are a number of sentence structure and grammar errors remaining, proofreading your work is advised."
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Kibin. (2023). Gender bias in india's sexual assault laws. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/gender-bias-in-indias-sexual-assault-laws-aTDlmQLU
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