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Global Warming and the Dyson Company

This essay focuses on Dyson Company's innovative culture and production practices. The student explores the idea of Dyson manufacturing electric cars as a response to environmental trends.
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Beth's feedback:

"Your analysis of Dyson is clearly stated and organized well. You cite your references and tie in the production practices and culture of Dyson and the possibility of Dyson becoming a contributor to the electric vehicle space. My biggest advice to you would be to have a professional edit and proofread this essay for you, as there were numerous errors, making it difficult to read smoothly. For future essays, I recommend you focus on improving on the following: singular/plural usage, not having capitalized words in the middle of sentences (unless they are proper nouns), general spelling, and reading over your work for missing words. Additionally, please check your references (both in-text citations and the reference list at the end) to make sure they adhere to the style guide you are required to use. Kibin has some helpful blog posts regarding style, if you want to check them out!"

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