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Goals I Want to Accomplish in Sixth Grade

This is a reflective essay in which the author identifies goals they want to accomplish before the end of sixth grade. The two goals they identified are learning how to do major projects on a computer and memorizing vocabulary.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You are off to a good start identifying and describing goals that you want to accomplish before the end of the year. Right now, it is unclear if you are supposed to be specifically identifying two goals or if you are supposed to be identifying two categories of goals. There are a large number of grammar, punctuation, and spacing errors that are impacting the readability of the essay. You identify many goals that you want to accomplish but do not identify how you will accomplish all of them. Consider specifically focusing on only a couple of goals or include details about how you are going to accomplish all of them to have a well-rounded essay."

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