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Sarah was in the 7th grade when she saw her best friend Amanda dead laying on the ground Amanda was shot by a man who was also known as Amandas dad An ambulance came racing down the street and ran in to see what has happened The paramedic askedWhat happenedShe was shot by her father Sarah saidThe Paramedics took Amanda and rushed her to the nearest hospital Sarah was very nervous not knowing the fate of Amanda She was told to stay at Amandas house to answer questions from the policeDo you know why he shot her a Police officer respondedSarah sat there for a minute and thought about Amandas past It all started when Amanda was 7 and she was coming home from school she saidHer father became abusive and fought with her mother all the time Her parents ended up getting divorced and she was happy She lived with her mother after her parents got divorced and never really saw her father The man askedWhat happened to her motherHer mother died on her 9th birthday when she suffered from heart failureHow did Amanda feel The officer askedShe got really depressed and upset that she had to live with her abusive father She respondedBZZZZZ The officers phone rang The paramedics were calling about AmandaWhat happened Sarah started to tear upShe was getting nervous and wanting to know right away The police man walked out of the room leaving Sarah alone I am so sorry Sarah Amanda didnt make it to the hospital She died on the way there The officer responded Sarah started sobbing and couldnt calm downDo you want to finish this another day He askedYes please she quietly said The next day Sarah skipped school and stayed home All she could think about was that her best friend was dead She cried constantly and would cry herself to sleep But the next week she woke up and finally was calm enough to
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