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An Analysis of the Topic of Nutrition and the Recommended Dietary Allowances

This is a paper about good nutrition. The author highlights the importance of paying attention to the Recommended Daily Allowances (RDA) and the impact good health has on children and older adults. The author suggests that children do better in school and that older adults lessen their risk factors for obesity and high blood pressure. The author mentions that it is essential to eat various foods, maintain an ideal weight, avoid too much fat, and eat foods with enough starch and fiber to be healthy. The author also discusses the five food groups (bread, meat, vegetable, fruit, and dairy), that nutritional facts labels are made to help people meet dietary guidelines, and the importance of water, vitamins, and minerals.
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"Your paper is very neatly formatted, which is essential for good reading comprehension. For the sake of your paper's organization, I suggest that you make sure to add an introduction and a conclusion. The introduction allows you to discuss the topic of your essay briefly. It should also end with a thesis statement that guides the body of your paper. The conclusion will enable you to summarize the main points you made in the body of the paper and relate them to the thesis statement. Both of these things will make the purpose of your writing clear and allow you to write the body of the paper in a more focused manner. The content of your essay is excellent. You have included a substantial amount of factual information to support your points. Two suggestions I have are that you elaborate on some places where you provided less information than others and make sure that you cite all information you obtained from texts to avoid plagiarism issues. Last, for the most part, you did an excellent job with the grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure. There are a few places that could benefit from some improvement. Ensure that you or someone else reads through the paper to catch these areas."

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