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Everyone in my family is very important to me and I would give everything for them Growing up my sisters Alex Lisa and I did not get along very well but now that they both have families we are the closest we have ever been I was 12 years old when my niece Adriana was born she was the first baby in my family that I was around every day Having a baby in the house was something completely new to me and everyday there was a new challenge for me When I finally decided to change her diaper for the first time I had no idea what to do so my sister had to walk me through it while she was laughing and taking pictures of me changing her daughter Eventually everything from feeding her to changing her became very easy and now taking care of babies is a very simple task for me Becoming a young aunt has been such an amazing experience and I cherish every moment I have as an aunt In 2009 my family had a tough year due to a few deaths in the family Adriana had been the best thing to happen to our family that year and we were all so happy to welcome this beautiful girl into our family Once Adriana was born my relationship with my sisters and mom had become so much stronger My sisters and I realized we need to become more mature and stop fighting so we can all be a positive influence on her Prior to my Alexs pregnancy we wouldnt communicate very often and when we did it was usually just us blowing up at each other over little things Having Adriana around was very special firsts that we all got to share my sister Alex was a mother for the first time my sister Lisa and I were both aunts for the first time and our mom had
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