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Hamlet's Depression: Driver of His Behavior and Thoughts

This essay analyzes the impact of depression on Hamlet's thought and behavior in Shakespeare's Hamlet.
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Julie's feedback:

"Your analysis is strong and shows a close reading of the text. Though your content is strong, your essay does contain numerous punctuation and grammar errors. Common nouns such as "father" should not be capitalized. Also, please be sure to consistently use the literary present tense, rather than alternating between present and past tense. A number of sentences are not adequately punctuated. For example, your thesis sentence is a run-on: it should be either broken up into two sentences or the clauses connected with a semicolon (after "deceased father"). Quotations should be introduced or otherwise integrated into a sentence. You may also want to include more direct quotations. Finally, please check the formatting of your references: they should not be italicized or centered, and the capitalization is not consistent."

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