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"This paper is off to a good start, and your writing is clean and has good structure and flow. The current argumentation proceeds clearly. As it stands, the essay is incomplete, introducing a new case (Ozzy Osbourne) right at the end; think about whether the prompt or assignment calls for another case as evidence--perhaps a brief list of other cases elsewhere in the paper can help give the "landscape" of the issue. My other concern is that, reading this in 2021, the discussion has not been updated to help the reader understand where this cultural issue stands today--is it just an artifact of another decade, or does it provide lessons or food for thought to modern readers. Help the reader understand the urgency by bringing the discussion up to date--how does this issue impact us today? Is it in the questions of free speech? cultural "scares" or moral panics? mental health? notions of art? Maybe it is something else entirely--the direction is up to you, and providing that kind of argumentative closure will also ensure the essay itself has a feeling of completeness."
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Kibin. (2024). The judas priest subliminal message trial and the heavy metal panic of the '80s and '90s. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/heavy-metal-suicide-sJhQ3NnF
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