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Clapping I sigh as she makes her trot circle after another perfect round Does she ever make mistakes I walk over to Katie and her horse Manny Nice round Kate I say patting Mannys neck A few minutes later the awards are announced and I cant help but cringe as my trainer whoops when Katies name is called first I head back to the barn preparing for the onslaught of Katie-admiration It comes as it usually does That was a great round wasnt it Peyton my trainer remarks Oh yeah definitely I reply trying my best to sound genuinely excited I help Katie pin her blue ribbon up next to my red one The jealousy trickles into my stomach a feeling that Ive grown accustomed to but one that still makes me feel sick inside Katie is three years younger than I yet she wins more blue ribbons in a year than I have won in the last three Despite this statistic and the jealousy that simmers the rivalry between us has become that of siblings In lessons we compliment one another for a well-executed exercise all the while thinking of ways to make our own ride better The competitive nature of our relationship pushes me to work harder but I know that when there is a mistake in my round Katie will be at the gate to say That was a bummer but the rest of your course was really goodMy blue ribbons are sometimes not enough to quell the feeling that Katies successes overshadow my own Each time Katie wins another class my confidence falters and all I can think is that I wont ever ride as well as Katie Then I begin to question myself Why do I continue to do something that makes me feel this way But riding has been my lifeblood since I
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