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"You've done a good job locating examples of how the ads use rhetoric to convey their messages. The use of specific details when discussing ad 1 is very successful; your reader gets a good sense of the elements of the ad and how each conveys the message. I suggest using that same approach for ad 2: help the reader "picture" the ad. For example, unless your reader has seen ad 2, they will have trouble understanding the visual imagery you refer to in the second-to-last paragraph: some brief phrasing or well-chosen words will help guide the reader.
Similarly, I suggest making the project of rhetorical analysis clear in the first paragraph; consider using a final sentence there to connect the description of the context (pollution) to the project of rhetorical analysis. This will create a clear thesis statement that guides your reader into the body paragraphs.
Finally, keep an eye on some repeated argumentation; the first body paragraph largely repeats itself--streamline the paragraph to eliminate this redundancy and ensure greater impact."
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