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How Anna Pavlova, Loie Fuller, and Isadora Duncan Influenced Dance

In this informative essay, a student discusses the influence Anna Pavlova, Loie Fuller, and Isadora Duncan have had on dance. The student focuses on classical ballet and free dance.
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Angela's feedback:

"You have solid pieces of information to share with the reader, and your overall message about how different well-known dancers have contributed to the art is easy to understand. However, your essay’s overall formatting should be double-checked. It looks like there may be a paragraphing problem with the sentence beginning “Ditching the classic pointe.” Moreover, maintaining a consistent font color will make your work more polished. Recasting sentence fragments such as the first statement of the essay will enhance the clarity of your writing. Titles of books should be italicized and not written in all caps. Words such as “tutu” should not be capitalized, and an edit is needed to address grammar issues such as the use of “except” instead of “accept.” Your use of semicolons should also be revisited."

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