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How Artist Giumi You Infuses Current Events into Her Paintings

In this essay, the student provides a brief analysis of two paintings by Giumi You. The student compares You's style to elements of other well-known artists, and also discusses how You's life experiences, involving current events such as the pandemic and the California wildfires, inspire her work.
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Emily's feedback:

"Your analysis of two of Giumi You's paintings is very detailed and descriptive, making it easy to create an image in the reader's mind. You might want to consider rearranging the background paragraph about Guimi You to have everything in chronological order, both her schooling and her exhibits. While this is more of a minor detail, it will flow a little better that way and create a good timeline of her life and her work. There were also a few minor grammar and punctuation errors. It can be helpful to read your writing out loud to ensure you catch any small mistakes like that. Overall this is well written and provides a good overview of pieces of Giumi You's art and her overall style."

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