How Can the United States as a Country Repair Their Toxic Partisan Politics
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"You have done a good job stating your position and including evidence from the text to help explain why you feel that way. Right now the essay lacks an introduction that explains to the reader what you are going to be writing about before you write about it. Including this with give help the reader have a better understanding of what is to come. Throughout the essay you tend to communicate the same ideas repeatedly using similar or the same language. If it is necessary to communicate the same ideas, make an effort to try to word things in various ways. You noted that the the author of the editorial did not provide evidence to support their ideas and throughout your essay there are places that feel as if they are lacking evidence also. You strongly state your thoughts but the reader is left with a "Why?" feeling. When you do use facts to support your position it is important that you cite them to make your argument valid and to avoid plagiarism issues. "
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