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How Digital Pollution is Overwhelming the Online Experience

This persuasive essay warns the reader about the impact of digital pollution, including scams, the proliferation of digitally altered images, and email spam. The student emphasizes the problems of false information and difficulty of tracking down information once something goes viral.
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Bridget's feedback:

"You've done well in arranging your discussion, main ideas, and introduction and conclusion into a clear five-paragraph structure. Each paragraph is focused and the overall contours of the discussion fairly easy to follow. Within the paragraphs, mechanical errors (punctuation, sentence structure) negatively impact clarity. I suggest focusing at the sentence- and word-level to polish up the writing. Similarly, bringing any citations into alignment with your style guide will help the reader in navigating between evidence and discussion.

In your first body paragraph, you reference the harm done by digital pollution. I suggest addressing effects, in terms of stakes and urgency, in the other two body paragraphs, as well. To build out your conclusion, you could also address effects and impact of digital pollution, especially if you want to encourage your reader to any specific action or understanding of the issue."

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