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How Domestic Violence Exposure Affects Adolescent Behavior

In this essay, the student analyzes the mental health and behavior of children and adolescents who are exposed to domestic violence, and the effectiveness of treatments for them.
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Emily's feedback:

"Overall, this essay is fairly well written and it is clear you are familiar with this topic. However, I was left with some questions that you may want to consider addressing. I am unsure if you are focusing on adolescents or children, or both, as you seem to go back and forth throughout. What is the pretest that you mention in the introduction? What exactly is the Mantra intervention? It seems that some places just need a little more clarification so that an outside reader will be able to understand better. I also notice that there are three sources listed on your reference page, but only one of those was used in your essay. Make sure that any information that came from those other two sources is noted with in-text citations as well. Additionally, this essay could benefit from a round of editing to fix the grammar and punctuation errors, some of which impact readability."

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