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How Evil and Suffering Can Be Overcome According to Pope Francis's "Fratelli Tutti"

This is an essay about evil and suffering, two fundamental theological ideas. Pope Francis's encyclical, Fratelli Tutti is used as the foundation to articulate how the world is enduring evil and suffering, how the world can achieve fraternity, and how that fraternity can be a source of hope. The author mentions COVID-19 as natural evil, how it has led to social and religious uncertainty, and how it has led to anxiety and depression. Finally, the author discusses how the pandemic has led to health, economic, social, and political crises.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You are off to a great start with this paper. With a little bit of reorganization and elaboration, I think you will significantly improve it. The first step to enhance focus, purpose, and organization is to write a clear thesis statement. While all parts of a thesis statement are in your introduction, it did not quite come together. The thesis statement should appear at the beginning or end of your introduction. It should communicate the topic of your paper and the points that you will elaborate on to cover that topic. Next, all of the content of your essay should align with your topic. Since your topic is primarily about the two fundamental theological ideas, it should be clear how all of the points that you bring up in the body of your paper are related to those. I would also break very long paragraphs into multiple ones for the sake of cohesiveness. Next, you mentioned that your essay should be APA formatted. Some things need to be resolved to make your formatting consistent. Your page numbers need to be in the correct spot, the title of your reference page needs to be centered, and your references need to be consistently formatted with all of the necessary information. Last, you have a decent command of grammar, sentence structure, and punctuation. The most repeated mistake I ran across was not using commas after introductory phrases."

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