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Bridget's feedback:
"You've done well in backing up your interpretation with specific examples from the code. I would like to check in on your prompt or the scope of the project: have you been asked to cold read the text, with no reference to outside sources? If so, this is fine, but if you can bring in other sources, checking against secondary sources may help deepen the discussion beyond textual analysis. Again, this will depend on your prompt.
My second main comment is regarding the ending. Because you end on a specific note (children and family), the essay doesn't feel finished. Craft a concluding paragraph that helps ease the reader out of the discussion by summarizing the key takeaways and reasserting the essay's main project."
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Kibin. (2024). How hammurabi's laws encoded cultural values. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/how-hammurabis-laws-encoded-cultural-values-3aoQjIq9
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