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How Hester Prynne Changes Over Time in The Scarlet Letter

This is an analytical essay in which the author critically analyzes the life of Hester Prynne for the novel "The Scarlet Letter" written by Nathaniel Hawthorne.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You are off to a good start with this essay. You have selected strong points that support your position and have included substantial evidence to support those points. However, the current introduction is not compelling because it feels a bit out of order and word choice and grammar are confusing your message. Overall, you have good transitions between both sentences and paragraphs leading to an essay that is logical and easily read. I would suggest that you present the paragraphs of your essay in the same order that you listed your points in the thesis statement of your introduction (i.e., talk about courage, then enlightenment, then resourcefulness). There are a number of grammar and punctuation errors in the essay that should be resolved with a round of proofreading. Overall, the use of MLA style conventions is good, just make sure that your header is the same font as the rest of your paper. The conclusion is also having the same affect as the introduction. Despite it being a good summary of your paper, word choice and grammar are muddling the message."

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