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How Hitler Misinterpreted Friedrich Nietzsche to Wage World War II

In this history essay on the Nazis, the student gives an overview of World War II, with an emphasis on Germany's decisions and role, and argues that Hitler misinterpreted the writings of Nietzsche to form his ideology.
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Bridget's feedback:

"Because this essay is incomplete, it's difficult to determine how well it meets its goals and, indeed, what the central purpose is. The opening paragraphs suggest this will be an essay about Nietzsche and Nazism, with an emphasis on comparing texts to demonstrate the claim that Hitler had to misinterpret to apply the ideas. This discussion evaporates as a narrative of the lead-up to war picks up speed; this continues until the current ending. The paragraphs on the war itself focus on military history and a big-picture timeline that, again, is hard to line up with the opening discussion of Nietzsche.

As you move forward, the task will be to determine what your central focus needs to be, according to your prompt, and what material in the current draft can be brought forward to facilitate this. Strategies may entail changing up the paragraph order, imposing a more overarching introduction, or realigning more general discussion to suit the thesis-driven aspect presented in the current draft's first paragraph. Moving around the building blocks with purpose will help you use what you have to head into the next step of the writing process."

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