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How I Found Myself Again After Losing Myself to Anxiety

In this personal reflection, the writer describes living with anxiety and how they eventually overcame it by stepping out of the anxiety "character" and back into themself.
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Erin's feedback:

"This is a moving reflection on your experiences with anxiety and how you ultimately moved through them. At a couple points, the organization of your essay gets a little confusing. For instance, though you're referring to past events, you mention that you "fear what [you] love the most" -- past tense would probably be most appropriate there. In the paragraph before you describe standing up for yourself against the anxiety, your focus wavers back and forth between how you felt then and how you feel now: I would revisit that paragraph and see if you can keep it focused on how the anxiety affected you in the past. Finally, I would recommend proofreading your final draft. You have good control over conventions overall, but there are some run-on sentences and missing periods to patch up."

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