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My world is a dark bleak place with little pleasure and filled with every evil and every good you can imagine In some ways that is the way I prefer When it is dark you find your own path Nothing is guiding you to the end Someone taps my shoulder I remember where I am My bed my room my world This time I get punched lightly on the shoulder Were going to be late for training Eliza get up I scowl at the wall Im facing Not at the voice the name Eliza So ridiculous It was given to me by my parents apparently it was passed on for generations So outdated Ill be up in a minute Carolie I heard her sigh open our door and wander down the hall to who knows where Carolie is my roommate assigned roommate in our training facility Long ago unnecessary objects and jobs were removed from society to ease life and create efficiency Now we have four main ones military medical education and agriculture underneath each main career path there are a few more specific careers you can pursue A few At age 10 your parents decide where you would like to go based on where they would like you to be After you are assigned a career path you take eight years of training beginning with in initiating class and ending with Superior class My parents were both in Medical they only wanted my sister and I to be in Medical to follow them They didnt care about our happiness My sister and I were born together she is slightly older than I and she too is in Medical I hated them all They only took pride in her At age 8 both my parents disappeared To this day it is still a mystery how but it gave me the best opportunity of my life I was left in the dark with
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