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How I Grew as a Person by Going to Prep School

This essay describes the author's journey from public school to private prep school and explores the role of growth and openness in his life.
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Amanda's feedback:

"I thought you did a great job capturing the essence of your experience here--it's clear to me how transformative and powerful it was for you to shift from going to school at home to leaving for prep school far away. Overall, I found this to be very well written and extremely focused on a single topic, but it may be actually *too* focused, which is to say, you use the phrase "open to growth" so many times it becomes distracting. I would suggest finding other ways to say the same thing to improve the flow of this paper. I also found a few grammar errors (dreamt, open to growth should not be capitalized) that were not huge issues, but might impact your grade so I'd suggest rereading this or getting it proofread to ensure it's in perfect shape!"

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