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What is Stony Brook University I said as I read through my emails after a college showcase As I was about to delete the email from the school Id never heard of my mother stopped me Her and my father both told me that I should never write off a school that showed any interest in me In the email the head coach of the Stony Brook University womens soccer team told me that he had seen me play at the college showcase tournament the past weekend He gave me an overview of the university and said to call him so that we could discuss my possible future at their school I really did not want to call him I had never heard of the school and I thought that I needed a much prestigious school that would be impressive to everyone After a lecture from my parents I decided I would call the coach and hear what he had to say After talking to him for a good twenty minutes I came to the realization that this school could be everyone I ever wanted He had told me that the school was in New York just thirty minutes away from New York City He told me that they had my major pre-dental He told me that I would be playing on their soccer team with a scholarship and lastly he told me I could come for a visit as soon as Id like After he had sparked my interest so quickly I told my parents that I had to go After my visit I knew that this was the school I wanted to go to In the back of my head I was still concerned with what everyone else would think I had offers from other schools such as Cornell University of Virginia and Wake Forest What would people think what would my parents think if I chose a school that I believed
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