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How I Want the World To See Me

This is a reflective essay. The author talks about what was expected of them growing up both because of their heritage and religion. They also talk about some of their likes and dislikes, along with how they want people to see them.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You are off to a great start with this paper. You have provided a significant amount of detail about yourself and what it is like to be you. You also have explained how you would like people to see you. I have to agree with some of the previous comments. The essay is quite repetitive, in that you say some of the same things multiple times. There are a significant amount of grammatical errors, to the point that it impacts readability. The main thing you have focused on in this essay is how your family feels about you and how they think you should act. Since the goal of the essay is to describe how you would like the world to see you more detail about what you like to do and and who you would like to be should be included."

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