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How John Lennon's Life Shaped His Music

This biographical essay on John Lennon looks at his early life, his time with the Beatles, and his solo work up until the moment of his death. The student highlights Lennon's creative journey from childhood and his work with Yoko Ono to help others through art.
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Bridget's feedback:

"Your presentation of the biographical details is efficient--the information moves at a good clip that is appropriate for an overview. Because the organization is mostly strictly chronological, I would suggest revising the organization of the first few paragraphs. For example, Cynthia Powell is introduced at the end of the first paragraph, and then comes back a page later after the discussion has moved back to Lennon at age 16. The same happens when referring to Julia Lennon's death. Once the Beatles break up, the chronology is pretty straightforward, so I suggest focusing reorganization prior to "In 1970..." You will also want to proofread carefully for errors in the writing, such as verb tense issues that can make the sequence confusing. As a final, related comment, make sure to follow conventions for titles; for example, album titles are italicized, without quotation marks. Proper formatting helps the reader track what kind of work you are referring to."

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