scroll to top
Stuck on your essay?
Get ideas from this essay and see how your work stacks up
Word Count: 460
On a another stormy day in middle school 8th grade ready to start high school waking up My mom walks in and says your dad past away this morning Blew me away another sad day for the Campbell family right Here I am thinking how am I going to get through high school boys prom and my future wedding without him This is where the journey beganLosing my dad was not a complete shock because he was really sick but going day by day not able to tell him how my day went or hear his voice was an absolute different story Dealing with this loss led to depression extreme insecurities and terrible decisions I was bouncing all around with school friends and family I was getting nowhere I was messing around with the wrong things and crowd One year of high school goes by and this is where the mess really began I started going to parties and my grades were dropping funny thing though I did not care I was dealing with all kinds of drama My whole life was being turned upside down because of my choices and it was time to turn it backI ended up leaving a lot of my unhealthy relationships behind and started gaining healthy ones I began to think positively and focused more on what I have There was no way I could leave my siblings out of my life either I started noticing the tremendous impact that I have on them Dwelling on the past was doing nothing for me but I will always miss him My mind changed on my career choice I began to think about the medical field I promised myself that if I became a doctor I would be the best That whatever I planned to do I would make him proud and do the best to my ability There is nothing I would want more than the feeling of my
@Kibin is a lifesaver for my essay right now!!
- Sandra Slivka, student @ UC Berkeley
Wow, this is the best essay help I've ever received!
- Camvu Pham, student @ U of M
If I'd known about @Kibin in college, I would have gotten much more sleep
- Jen Soust, alumni @ UCLA