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"This essay is organized well, with focused body paragraphs and clearly demarcated introduction and conclusion. Your thesis argues that the two characters have more in common than meets the eye; however, I notice the body paragraphs are largely focused on the alienation and rejection of the creature. Consider either expanding the discussion about Victor in each body paragraph to support this thesis or consider adjusting the thesis to reflect the current discussion.
You've done a good job using plot summary to support a text-based analysis. Make sure to embed the direct quotations properly into your syntax (check your punctuation) and provide context as needed. Keep in mind that when using the parenthetical citation, the period comes after the parentheses (like this)."
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(Kibin, 2025)
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Kibin. (2025). How mary shelley uses revenge and alienation to drive character. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/how-mary-shelley-uses-revenge-and-alienation-to-drive-character-i0z1z3oQ
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("How Mary Shelley Uses Revenge and Alienation to Drive Character.")
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"How Mary Shelley Uses Revenge and Alienation to Drive Character." Kibin, 2025, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/how-mary-shelley-uses-revenge-and-alienation-to-drive-character-i0z1z3oQ
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1. "How Mary Shelley Uses Revenge and Alienation to Drive Character." Kibin, 2025. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/how-mary-shelley-uses-revenge-and-alienation-to-drive-character-i0z1z3oQ.
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