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I was six the day I found out that I was coming to American and that was the day I was not only the happiest but also the most nervous I was happy to see my siblings that I had not seen for six months My dad had took my older sister and brothers to America before me and the day that my mom left without tell me that my mom left without tell me she didnt want to see me cry As I was wanting at home in Eritrea I thought my mom was visiting my grandparents in other villages so I was okay to stay with my aunt and cousins until she returned she never returned it would be four month before I would see her anginaOnce I was told that I was going to US I felt so nervous because everything was going to be different School was the main reason my father brought me and my siblings to America He wanted us to get a better education The education over there is so different A teacher has the right to hit students and If a student talks during class the teacher would ask the student to come to the front of the room the student would get hit with a stick on the hand When you get grade 12 you have to go to the army and you dont have choice of not going because thats what the government wants you to do If you dont go then mostly likely you would have someone come to house and search that whole house to see if someone is hiding Some women get married at age 16 and have kids so they dont have to go to the army
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