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We are interested in learning more about you and the context inwhich you have grown up formed your aspirations andaccomplished your academic successes Please describe thefactors andchallenges that have most shaped your personal lifeand aspirations How have these factors caused you to growMy family is my world My mom dad and two sisters are what Ihold most dear to my heart We are from Mexico My two sistersare 10 and 15years old They are both so lovely in their ownunique ways My mom and my dad are hard workers and greatparents Great parents who have taught me valuable lessonsabout life and happiness They are the reason why I want to getan education and the reasonwhy I am me My parents are myinspiration for doing my best every day and for wanting tosucceedMy mom and dad have always emphasize the importance of schoolfor my future since my mom only ended high school and my dadnever finished it They know thatthings are hard when you donthave a lot of education I know that they both had the talent todo something different with their lives I have seen my fathersnatural talent for math and art and my moms talent forscience I can imagine my dad as an architect and my mom as anagricultural engineer that was her dream job They had toforget about school and enter into the work force because theywanted to help their familiesMy two sisters also inspire me I want to be a good example forthem I donot want to be an excuse for them for not doingthings right We as humans are always looking for the easiestway to do something and sometimes giving up is appears to bethe easiest thing I am not opening that door for them When mylittle sister Carolina was learning to walk she use to givelittle steps to try to reach me if she is still following me Iwill show her the way to a good futureI love my
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