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How My Mother Has Impacted My Life

To answer the question of "Who has impacted your life?", the student paints a picture of their relationship with their mother, finding inspiration in her love, attention, and strength in the face of grave medical problems.
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Bridget's feedback:

"Your affection and connection with your mom really comes through in this essay, which is organized logically and has an overall good sense of flow across the entire discussion. Your use of comparisons and specific examples adds depth. As you think about moving forward, a careful and thorough proofread will be necessary. Your syntax and diction are solid--the problems come with the frequent moments where incorrect punctuation is causing sentence boundary issues. Keep an eye out for comma splices and run-on sentences. These impact readability and confuse the reader, who may have a hard time figuring out where one point ends and another picks up."

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