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No matter what I will always be there to support you and if you need anybody to talk to I am here to listen This is a phrase that every child wants to hear their mother say to them I dont think that anyone could live without having someone to call mommy There is always at least one person in ones life that influences who heshe is as a person My mother is the one who has changed my life and made me who I am today Determination motivation generosity and diligence are traits that my mother possesses that I admireEveryone needs an external and internal foundation of encouragement to be successful My mom has motivated me to succeed in everything I do She was there supporting me and doing anything she could to help me reach my goals When I was trying out for volleyball team she attended all of my games and was always there to cheer me on She always said that I would become someone great one day and encouraged me to be the best I can be My goal is to become a Neonatal Nurse Im in the Nursing program at my school which is a three year program that gives me insight into the medical field and provides me with the skills needed to earn my CNA certification at the end of my senior year My mom would listen to me ramble on and on about all I had learned that day even if she didnt want to hear it She let me practice everything I learned on her whether it was taking blood pressure or just showing her the proper way to put on and take off gloves One day I came home from school and I had just learned how to make a bed the right way when youre in the nursing home That day my mom was doing her weekly cleaning I was so
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