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I would say my writing has improved a great deal because of thisclass although I still think there is still room for improvement Thebiggest thing I am proud of accomplishing is the fact I stayed focusedand finished this class When I first started this class I was kind of nervous because it had been a long time since I had been in a classroomI just didnt know what to expect English hasnt been my favoritesubject in the past still having some issues with my convections part ofitBy being in this class I found out I didnt know as much I thought Idid about writing Just because you can write a word or a sentencedoesnt mean you can write This class showed me how to write a properpaper and the different styles of writing The main thing in writing isto captivate the reader This class gave me the information needed towrite a good essay from thesis to conclusion I am not the perfect writer or even a good writer but I am gettingthere I need the most improvement in punctuation and in organizationThe reason for this is not because of how I was taught but otherreasons mostly time This semester was particularly hard because of thelack of time with my busy schedule So in order to improve my writingIm going to concentrate on the basics the conventions part Since Iknow what I need to do to improve my writing there is no reason I cantwrite an error free paper If I had to start this class again I wouldspend more time preparing for my essays For this class I am going to give myself a B- I think this grade fitsmy efforts not saying I didnt give it my all but that I needimprovement in a couple of areas I just feel that if I was betterprepared I would have done better So for this time it is a B- and
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