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If personal relationships and environmental settings were the only things to modify behavioral patterns then there would be a world full of perfect people Everyone told me I have the so called perfect life and I never thought I did People would tell me how pretty I was and how much my parents loved and spoiled me I always wanted more for some reason Although my parents bought me a lot of material things and showed love and affection it never seemed to satisfy something inside of me I never felt adequate to the other children at school Then in seventh grade when I went to O T Bonner Middle school I was forced into being a person I knew nothing about It wasnt me it was all wrong I skipped P E with some of my friends for three or more months I still made descent grades so I thought everything was fine I needed to think again Then I decided to go back to Bonner for eighth grade which was the worst mistake I could have ever made I was tortured by many of the students in my class and others who didnt even know me I had no idea what was happening and why it was happening to me I had a few friends but they couldnt help I felt all alone in a room of thirty I became severely depressed and attempted suicide three times having to be taken to the hospital twice Then my mother decided to home school me so I had the chance to reclaim my life That was the best decision she ever made and Im so thankful she did I finished my eighth grade year with honors and continued with my ninth grade year I later found out that my seventh grade science teacher who despised me and was the coach of the football team told the players
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