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Going through high school for four years can make anyone realizehow much they can change as an individual and mature over comeobstacles tofinally reach success and fulfill goals In mypersonal experience struggling through my self-confidence andtrying to overcome procrastination with my school workinhibited me from discovering how much potential I haveThrough my new found maturity and perseverance I overcame thesetough obstacles by believing more in myself and in my abilitiesas a personThrough high school were difficult for me My lowself-confidence cause me to get preoccupied with other peoplesopinions of me They would alwayscall me ugly fat and tell me Iwas worthless Hearing those words hurt me so bad I always triedto cover my pain by just keeping my head up and smiling knowingdeep down inside I was hurting more than ever This caused meto always feel that I was beingjudge and I never looked at whatneeded for myself My whole life I felt as if I was in acompetition with everyone it affected me emotionally andphysically I felt as if I was not attractive enough orintelligent enough Someone who made me realize that I wasspecial was my dad He simply told me everyday that I wasbeautiful and I was special My dad guiding me through mytough time let me know that I was not alone Being preoccupiedwith my lack of self confidence affected my academicperformance Itdd not show my potential pr what I really had tooffer as a good student Someone helped me to progress in myjunior and senior year was my older cousin Kadijah She is myrole model for me through her own achievements as a collegestudent It showed methat to succeed believe in myself and toconsistently believe that you can fulfill your dreams She alsoshowed me to focus on these qualities and have a positiveattitudeBy my junior year I developed a positive attitude I began tomature and overcomemy difficult obstacles For example I beganto appreciate more by telling myself everyday I am
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