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Bridget's feedback:
"You are off to a good start, and the reader can see the thoughtfulness and work with the evidence you've gathered on the page. The font color is fairly difficult to read; check your style guide for rules on text and paragraph formatting to ensure your reader can experience your ideas without barriers.
Related to questions of formatting, I'm curious if the use of multiple lists is common to the genre of writing (or the expectations of the instructor). This presents the evidence in a clear and useful manner, and seems appropriate for giving advice to the reader. Lists like this can, however, miss opportunities to synthesize the evidence firmly under the umbrella of your ideas, related to both the argumentation and ethos.
My final comment addresses the main task in moving forward with this project. Frequent typos and errors in the writing create a bumpy reading experience apart from the aforementioned formatting. Proofread carefully to catch those and improve clarity and presentation. Especially in conveying advice or advancing a position, you want a polished piece that establishes ethos at all levels."
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Kibin. (2023). How pastors can tackle tithing and offering problems. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/how-pastors-can-tackle-tithing-and-offering-problems-RVSvsmIM
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