How the Past Shapes the Present in Religion and Mathematics
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"You do a good job of drawing a connection between religion and mathematics, and your first body paragraph defining what constitutes a religion is especially strong. Meanwhile, your conclusion needs revision because there are numerous typos. When using a dash to set off text in a given statement, note that an unspaced em dash is still preferred in academic writing over a space en dash or a spaced hyphen. The word "Bible" is typically capitalized when referring to the religious text. Maintaining consistency in how you format this word would make your work more polished overall. In addition, you should consistently use either single quotation marks or double quotes, not a mixture of both. Your second body paragraph runs a bit long. Generally, a paragraph should be about three-quarters of a page long (double-spaced) at most. Anything longer than that can make it hard for the reader to stay fully engaged with your writing. Consider breaking your second body paragraph into two paragraphs to address this problem."
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