How the Treaty of Versailles Sowed the Seeds of Another War

This essay on the Treaty of Versailles summarizes the victors' various motivations that, once embedded in the agreement, paved the way for World War II. The student notes in particular an appetite for revenge on the part of France (Clemenceau) and Britain (Lloyd George) that outweighed America's (Wilson's) idealistic vision.

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"Your discussion and use of secondary sources shows the reader your work with the topic, from research to bringing it together on the page in an organized narrative. This current draft relies heavily on direct quotations that do not altogether justify their presences, as they often lay out fact ("Wilson didn't want to enter the European War"). Related to addressing this will be integrating your quotations into the text; I recommend your first next task be in seizing further control of the literature and its presentation in your essay by focusing on quotation usage. First, review each direct quotation and consider paraphrasing or summary -- do check your style guide resources for advice on how to paraphrase, in particular, and you will still incorporate the in-text citation. Second, use signal phrasing to control how the reader understands the value of those direct quotations you determine should remain.

At the lower-order concerns level, make sure to apply a proofread to catch issues, including frequent comma splices that can impact clarity and flow. comma splices"

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("How the Treaty of Versailles Sowed the Seeds of Another War.")

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