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"You provide a clear procedure to complete the project, but it merely rewrites instructions from a single source. To provide value to the reader, you need to show a fresh perspective, such as by evaluating different methods. Otherwise, the reader can just go to the webpage where you got all your information. Your introduction discusses anger about the availability of aquariums, whereas disappointment might be a more likely reaction. Likewise, the conclusion falls flat. Besides constantly changing font sizes, your grammar needs attention. In particular, you should capitalize just one word (the first one) in the second paragraph."
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Kibin. (2023). How to build an aquarium. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/how-to-build-an-aquarium-SwCRy8wv
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