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How to Live and Maintain a Healthy Life

This is a persuasive essay in which the author discusses the importance of diet and exercise in terms of healthy living. The author goes into detail about the types of foods that should be eaten to get sufficient nutrients and vitamins and what is a proper amount of exercise.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You have done a great job explaining your stance on being healthy and providing information that supports that stance. You have also included strong language that appeals to the emotions of the reader. There tends to be a pattern of your writing switching back and forth between scholarly language and conversational language. To increase the impact of your message make sure to maintain the scholarly language throughout the entirety of the essay. You also include a lot of information that appears to be facts but there are no citations. Make sure that any facts that you have included in the essay are cited and that you steer away from including information that cannot be supported by a citation or opinion. Last, there are a number of grammar and sentence structure errors throughout the essay that need to be resolved. "

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