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How To Reduce Veteran's Mental Health Issues

This is an analytical essay in which the author talks about Veterans' mental health issues. The author goes into detail about the different mental health issues that Veterans experience, different causes of these mental health issues, and what we should do to reduce barriers to mental health help.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You are off to a good start with this essay. You have provided a substantial amount of evidence to support your position. Unfortunately, there are a lot of grammar mistakes that lead to much of the paper being hard to read. There are incomplete sentences, wording that is not scholarly, and word order errors. There are also places where improper spacing and lack of punctuation is impacting readability. There are a number of errors in the use of MLA style conventions. As written, your paper is lacking an introduction and a conclusion. An introduction should let the reader know what they are going to be reading about and end with a thesis statement that states the position you are taking in your paper. A conclusion should summarize all of the main points in the essay."

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