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"This essay is in a strong place to move forward, via a bit of tidying up, into a final draft. Your focus is evident across the paragraphs, and the reader appreciates the use of details derived from sources.
I notice the first two paragraphs and the body paragraph on child prodigies are longer and rely on hypotheticals and questions; while this is relevant to your topic, I feel the meandering nature of the opening acts as a barrier to the meat of the discussion. Can you streamline those first areas so the reader gets more quickly to the grounded body paragraphs? Once you do that, apply a similar approach to tightening up the presentation of the child prodigy body paragraph.
Related to reader experience, do make sure all quotations are properly formatted and set off with quotation marks. This will ensure the reader follows the discussion's use of evidence and can navigate between that material and your claims."
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Kibin. (2024). Evaluating the evidence for reincarnation. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/how-true-is-the-concept-of-reincarnation-CCqgjQnt
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