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Hydropower and the Use of Water Wheels: A Research Essay

This essay shares information about the water wheel and its many uses, such as farming, mining, and crushing.
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Christina's feedback:

"Nice work ensuring you gave a focus statement, sharing your intent to discuss the water wheel and its many uses, such as farming, mining, and crushing. Let’s begin your paragraphs in varied ways. For instance, in paragraph five, you could write, “As a renewable type of power, hydropower forms electricity by using turbines to turn gears or crush different items.” When you are writing using any style, let’s make sure you keep your font uniform and lines spaced evenly throughout the document. You would benefit from a solid round of editing to ensure any issues of punctuation, grammar, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure are resolved before submitting your work."

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